Post by account_disabled on Feb 22, 2024 8:31:20 GMT
Okay Annabel softened. He dropped the bracelet into the womans leather hands and held the silk before handing over the coins he had originally offered. Of course it was more than he wanted to spend but it was necessary. Just not necessary. Without it he would not have spent the night inside the walls. He pursed his lips and pushed the bracelet roughly into the bag creaking as he tapped the coins and who knew what other goods were pressed into the leather. Thats nice of you maam said the salesman. Leave now so that others may come. Keep on Annabelle left her pocket lighter than it had been in days or even weeks. Will it last a few more days He could not say. But if he hadnt found this silk he wouldnt have been able to see this moment. Without seeing the womans black eyes he sighed and walked away. EXAMPLE OF LOW FLOW Not knowing what to do Annabella looked at the salesman curiously.
His pockets were already light. He had at least three more days to live. At least. But the Phone Number List silk that the womans leathery hands caressed had to belong to him. He took coins out of his pocket the pitiful discs looked pitiful in his palm. Is it good asked the darkhaired woman. He had to make a decision now. Can he spare them He knew he had no choice but it was difficult to return them. Can three things seduce a woman His eyes fell on the various silks that glowed behind the woman. Maybe not. But what choice did he have He tries to get at least three. I will give you three pieces nothing else. The salesman laughed. Are not. g but hearing the womans voice was hard to accept.
He didnt want to offer a single piece of what was above him. It isnt. But he had no choice. The metal on her wrist was heavy and warm. He tried not to bite his lip as he searched for the chains looking at nothing in particular. Three items and Annabelle untied a bracelet hidden under a long sleeve this. Looking at him the woman took a step closer and held out her hand. I have to see that. So youre going to run away with him and leave me without him Annabelle snorted. Are not. Writing pace. Do you get the idea You dont need to finish the scene to notice the differences. What is the difference In the first the dialogues are fast with very little space between them. If Annabelle is stalking maybe its an exchange.
His pockets were already light. He had at least three more days to live. At least. But the Phone Number List silk that the womans leathery hands caressed had to belong to him. He took coins out of his pocket the pitiful discs looked pitiful in his palm. Is it good asked the darkhaired woman. He had to make a decision now. Can he spare them He knew he had no choice but it was difficult to return them. Can three things seduce a woman His eyes fell on the various silks that glowed behind the woman. Maybe not. But what choice did he have He tries to get at least three. I will give you three pieces nothing else. The salesman laughed. Are not. g but hearing the womans voice was hard to accept.
He didnt want to offer a single piece of what was above him. It isnt. But he had no choice. The metal on her wrist was heavy and warm. He tried not to bite his lip as he searched for the chains looking at nothing in particular. Three items and Annabelle untied a bracelet hidden under a long sleeve this. Looking at him the woman took a step closer and held out her hand. I have to see that. So youre going to run away with him and leave me without him Annabelle snorted. Are not. Writing pace. Do you get the idea You dont need to finish the scene to notice the differences. What is the difference In the first the dialogues are fast with very little space between them. If Annabelle is stalking maybe its an exchange.